18th Birthday rewrite plan

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Right, this this'll just be a plan on what's to change in the rewrite of 18th Birthday.

First, better writing, I will try my hardest to improve the quality of my writing from the first indention of the story, to something a bit more, well, good.

Second, location change, Balam will no longer be from Chad, but now from america. The reason for this is that I don't know enough about Chad to properly represent it in my story, and since I know a lot more about the U.S.A. she will now be American.

Third, slower pace, 18th birthday was felt to fast paced, it didn't flow well, so I will be changing that in the rewrite.

And that's it.
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